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©2006-2009 ~Elora-Danen
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3rd in the winged creature series

graphite and colored pencil on paper

model: vaoni-stock [link]
wings inspired by uglyguy's amazing work [link]

title suggestion by ~mindofka ... thanks!

** EDIT.... after discussion with drakendark, decided to go back and darken the lips a bit. it's subtle, but i think you'll like it better draken ;P lightened the nose too, as i agreed with KingLanky on this point.

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:iconflick7:
wow, simply wow
:iconelora-danen:
thank you very much :)

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~Elora
:iconsonny-fr:
Hello :wave:

I like very much this one :clap:
:iconkimberlydiamond:
The red lips are beautiful and I'm crap at titles so you ain't getting any help there :D
:iconzetimenvec:
personally, i think the lips are too harsh looking. though that probably was youre intention, id think itd be better if it wasnt so bright

although, it still looks great, tis fantastic

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LOVE TEH DRAGONS! [link]
WRRY! [link]
the rocks.... [link]
:iconmarkeee:
oh, wow! ;P Elora has really matured in sketching profiles! wow! you really have!

This one is by far the best of your sketches and i'm mighty proud. The lines are confident... everything seems deliberate but at ease... all the right stuff for a good graphite sketch... :P

Although i wont comment much about the red lips because the sketch, by itself is successful... i guess the lips do come out a bit too bright when you zoom in though... but all that crap is a question of preference :D

Over-all, i'd say you've really grown as in sketching.

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I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.
:iconmindofka:
What about "Aurora"? It seems like she's waiting for the sunrise, and saw the first ray of light. Compliments for the beautiful pencil work :clap:

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"Why do we strive for excellence when mediocrity is required?" Paul Arden
:iconmashime:
Masterful forshortening of the face... this angle is the death of me. Also like the sketchyness of the wings... goes a long way towards conveying a feel of lightness and vitality at the same time. Nice work !
:iconknocked:
wow i really, really like it.

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