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What the hell are you doing?
He asks.
And she looks up at him,
not really remembering
who he is.
Cross-legged on the floor,
Scissors in her hand,
surrounded
by mutilated photographic pieces of herself.
Eyes
Mouths
Expressionless heads…
Macabre snowflakes
scattered
without reason.
She gives him an abstracted smile,
sees his eyes go wide,
wishes vaguely she could recall what this means..
What happened?
He asks.
She has trouble grasping the scissors,
and she doesn’t understand why.
They seem slippery
in her red hands.
What do you mean?
She replies,
I’m just looking for my face.
©2006-2009 ~Elora-Danen
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:iconkinglith:
This is really good. I like your style. Great Job. Feel free to check out some of my work too. Thanks.

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“Satisfaction is the death of desire.”
:iconartofpoetry:
"Macabre snowflakes " << only line I don't like. Doesn't fit for some reason --- otherwise, it reminds me of an elaborate story created by a movie such as Requiem for a Dream.

I think you have something good going. Make something in Photoshop thats a bit more abstract -- you'd like it.

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Joe was here =]
:iconelora-danen:
thanks... and I will :D

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~Elora
:iconelora-danen:
thanks for the input... and what do you mean by "make something in Photoshop...." :confused: :)

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~Elora
:iconartofpoetry:
Look at some of my poetic entries, such as :thumb25400480:

I made something slightly more 'into' the poem. It has representation in both color and the words are just as poetic as the imagery.

Expand and enjoy!

(and comment on my poem too, if you like it ;))

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Joe was here =]
:iconelora-danen:
I see what you mean.... and I will take some time to linger in your gallery. :)

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~Elora
:iconelora-danen:
thanks.... :)

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~Elora
:iconperchanceadreamer:
why is everyone trying to get you to check out their art on YOUR deviation? it's about you and i like it. she feels kind of confused and alone and lost....everyone can rellate to that at some point or another...verily nice!!

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"the problem with resisting temptation is that you might not get another chance."-edwin chapin
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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature

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